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2014 2 Apr

Stars and Skies

von: Bob T Bright Filed under: Blog | TB | 5 Comments

Stars and Skies
 
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5 Comments

  1. Martina:

    Donnerstag, 3. April 2014 um 14:56

    Wow! Suppose it´s inspired by e.e.cummings. I love the space between the square brackets.

  2. Martina:

    Donnerstag, 3. April 2014 um 15:04

    I love the space between the words and the lines as well. Also the one between sentences. Anything can happen there.

  3. Bob:

    Donnerstag, 3. April 2014 um 15:33

    Thanks Martina! I appreciate your words very much.

  4. Bob:

    Donnerstag, 3. April 2014 um 15:35

    I forgot to say that I’m trying to develop a style of writing which can have something to say – without having to say something (if that makes any sense!)

  5. Martina:

    Donnerstag, 3. April 2014 um 21:50

    I know that problem. A direct message in a poem is old fashioned style.

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